The above draft is a revision in progress of the story on Legacy's Sabros that I am working on. The draft was turned in on time and others are helping edit. I tried to put in different little quirks to make it more enjoyable and interesting. I feel that I am keeping a clean perspective that overviews the material well. As this is just a draft and one of the first things I have written this year it definitely needs some work. I am trying to incorporate the energy you find in the Sabros into the article. I do believe that more content needs to be covered along with a clearer line of thought or vision so to speak. Overall I feel that I am at an average standing in the writing process at the moment.